我们的“第一次”

2023-02-13

这学期，“作文”开始列入了正式的课程。

This semester, "composition" began to be included in the formal curriculum.

但是，从一年级开始，林老师就已经开始训练我们阅读。那时侯，我们认识的字不多，她就经常念给我们听，常常给我们讲故事，培养我们的阅读兴趣。林老师很注重培养我们的写作能力。她首先教我们学会“看图说话”，让我们说给家长听，请家长帮忙记录。到了后来，我们认的字多了，林老师就开始教我们学写“看图写话”，也就是说：我们自己说自己写。到了一年级下册，林老师又开始教我们学写几十个字的日记直到一两百个字的周记。

每一次的“作文”，林老师都会细细地为我们点评，哪怕只是写出短短的几句话，她都会为我们喝彩！她还为我们建了Blog。林老师鼓励我们把自己的作文发表上去。她从不吝啬表扬我们，总是让我们感到自己是最棒的！每一篇作文，老师都会详细地注上评语。教我们哪里该修饰，哪里该陈述、哪里该略写。全班44份，一份不落。我知道，老师认真地看完这些作文，一定花了很多的时间；细心地注上那么多的评语，肯定花费了很多的精力。老师，您辛苦了！

Every time "composition", Miss Lin will comment for us carefully, even if only write a few words, she will cheer for us! She also built a blog for us. Mr. Lin encouraged us to publish our composition. She never grudgingly praised us, always let us feel that we are the best! The teacher will comment on every composition in detail. Teach us where to modify, where to state, where to write. There are 44 copies in the class, but none of them will fall. I know that it must have taken a lot of time for the teacher to read these compositions carefully; it must have taken a lot of energy to pay attention to so many comments carefully. Teacher, you are working hard!

今天，我们学会了写完整的作文。虽然，这只是“开始”，但是，我们很幸运地有一个辛勤的好老师！我相信，我们会很快进步的！！

Today, we learn to write a complete composition. Although, this is just the beginning, but we are very lucky to have a good hard teacher! I believe that we will make progress soon!!